Strained conversation
You now look away
Too little effort
Nothing to say.
Feeling so hopeless
So cold and withdrawn
Don’t think you’ll notice
Once I am gone.
Hard to imagine
I’ve been deceived
Once so connected
Hard to believe.
No stimulation
No rocket fuel
Withholding emotions
So callous, so cruel.
Starved of affection
Unable to breathe
Gasping for air
You watched me bleed.
Stripped naked, embarrassed
Before your eyes
I crumbled, conceded
I wept and I cried.
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Photo from Google Images: drawingskill.com
This is heart-wrenchingly beautiful. A great piece!
Keep Writing!
Stay safe and stay healthy!
Enigma 🙂
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Thank you so much! Your comments are greatly appreciated! Hope you are also well and happy! Be safe! 💙
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I agree with enigma, heart wrenching yet captivating.
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Thank you! You have no idea…. what your comments mean to me! I GREATLY appreciate hearing from you! Hope you’re having a good day! You just made my day! 💙
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I’m thrilled if I managed to brighten your day. That makes mine. Your writing is so good, I’m totally relieved to have found you because I missed you very much.
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Thank you!!!! I took a break, but I’m back to writing again. Hoping to turn some of my poems into songs. Just bought a Ukulele. Bought it today… at a local music store. Went on YouTube …for a lesson. Can now play…. “YOU ARE MY SUNSHINE and AMAZING GRACE! Too funny!!!!!!! 😎
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This is touchy !!! Every word was like a bullet through the heart. A fantastic poem and very well written❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you for your kind words. So glad you liked my poem. It was heartfelt. 💙
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Punchy and to the point – an excellent description.
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Thank you, Anne! So glad you like this one! Your comments are greatly appreciated! Be safe! 💙
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Heartfelt and touching. A beautiful display of emotions.
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Thank you so much, Eugenia! Your comments are very kind and greatly appreciated! 💙
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